feedback from luke as a group

We found the feedback generally as a group a bit confusing, i understood it my self but some of my groups comments made things not as simple as i originally thought. Today when we were talking about the feed back as a group we got mixed up between our two ideas and i think i managed to sort it out and managed to keep things under control and then as a group we spoke about what we were going to do individually to help move the process along further, i was told to focus on who will be  the main character ( what he/she looks like ), where they will be and what they will be doing.

I found something similar to the location that we want for the lead singer to be walking down the street. I looked at Sam Smith- Stay with me and thought if we copied that opening bit of the video it would look cool.

There are lots of places round school with street like that. Cranleigh which is only 10 minutes away and Guildford which is 20 minutes away would both work

The main narrative in a simple one and is about this man walking down a street and some how gets to see what people do at night, we haven't come up how he gets to see this but he does.

The actor is just going to be a young male, this will be easy as we are school with a group of students aged 16 to 19.

I found something similar to the location that we want for the lead singer to be walking down the street. I looked at Sam Smith- Stay with me and thought if we copied that opening bit of the video it would look cool.

There are lots of places round school with street like that. Cranleigh which is only 10 minutes away and Guildford which is 20 minutes away would both work