Talking to Luke

In yesterdays lesson we spoke to Luke about the small narrative to the video, this is about the security guards and he did like it initially but came up with a better idea for us. He told us that a band playing in a car park seems to portray breaking of the rules in a away and therefore we should have some blue flashing lights and police car syrons to build suspension of the band playing on the roof of the car park. I was happy with the idea of the security guards to be honest but he obviously knows more about music videos as he has been doing them for the last 20 years so i am happy to change the narrative a little bit. It is frustrating for us as a group as we think we have come up with good ideas and just as we are finalising them we are told than we can do better.

This is what i thought that Luke mean about the flashing lights and the siren.